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Post by kami on Dec 8, 2007 16:00:23 GMT -5
Lily sat under a nearby tree,basking in the warm sun.She had been walking for a few days, trying to find someone.She smiled as she raised her arms over her head and yawned.Her tail spun around as she looked threw the tree tops of the forest.'I wonder where He went...I could have sworn He came through here...oh well...I havent taken a break for a while.' she thought as she pulled her sword from her hip off to the side...
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Post by KitsuneMIKO on Dec 9, 2007 10:49:27 GMT -5
((Okie dokie, here’s some advice when it comes to rpging. Always include a description of the area around you, then describe what your characters doing and if it’s a first post then include how your character got to the place. If you wish you can even describe what your characters thinking. Then add something another person would be able to respond to. Example: Missy smiled at the stranger and eagerly shook their hand. “Hello, it’s a pleasure to meet you! Tell me what brings you into these parts? If you include all of these in a post it should improve your rpging skills. Oh and another thing try typing up your posts on Microsoft word first, it will improve your grammar. Lol Shatan is going to have a hernia if she sees another error filled paragraph.))
Little light made it through the thick leaf filled branches, the little light that did cast dark shadows across the pine needle covered ground. The cool breeze felt refreshing as it brushed against her face, effectively ruffling her long raven locks. A smile graced her features as she took a deep breath inhaling the fresh air. Now usually you wouldn’t find a human in the Siratu forest, especially an unarmed one! But here was this young Miko clad girl, taking an afternoon stroll in one of the most demon infested forests in Japan. She fingered her white haori, the hem was slightly coming undone, she would have to find a way to fix it before it got worse. Her grey eyes stared up at the branches; it was odd she hadn’t run into a demon yet. The villagers from the village she had come from warned the young Miko to stay away from Siratu forest. After all a Miko in a demonic forest would seem an easy target. But Yukina was never one to fear things of the demonic persuasion. The only kinds of demons that bothered to take on a Miko were idiotic lower level demons which were easy to take care of.
Her eyes caught site of a break in the forest, the light over there was considerably lighter then in the dark shadows that the branches above provided. She continued moving forward and the trees were gradually getting thinner. Her eyes scanned the area, wondering what could of caused the trees to become so thin. Now the tree’s were just mere saplings. Heavily moss covered logs littered the ground, as a small stream weaved its way through. The moss even took the place of fallen leaves and pine needles, dragon flies zoomed back and forth. As they flittered around her head she couldn’t help but let out a small chuckle. Her eyes rested on a figure up ahead, so there were other things in the forests besides the occasional squirrel and the numerous birds.
By her guess it was a common breed of Kitsune, the red fox Kitsune was common to find all over the world. After all the normal red fox was just as numerous. Yukina herself had always found there coloring pretty and the red fox is the first thing most think of when some one mentions the word fox. Well not one to be rude and stare, Yukina approached the young fox. As she approached she put a kind smile on her face, after all most demons would be wary of an approaching Miko, so she wanted to put the girl at ease.
”Hello, I must say for a demon infested forest you’re the first demon I’ve come across. You don’t seem like a very old demon, probably still a kit in most demons eyes. So why is one as young as your self so far into these woods?
She took a seat on a dry spot across from the young girl. Her kind grey eyes never leaving her. The kit looked harmless enough but it wasn’t wise to underestimate a possible enemy. After all she didn’t know how the Kitsune would react, so she was alert just incase if she needed to defend her self.
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Post by kami on Dec 9, 2007 12:17:21 GMT -5
(thanx for the advice...its been 2 years since ive been on a site with rping...im still abit rusty lol)
Lily turned to her and said:"I was following a half demon when I lost his trail...and no I'm not very old but being a full demon I have had some experience..." Lily watched the girl and thought:'whats a human Miko doing here?' Lily smiled as she continued:"You havent by chance seen a half breed...about a few inches taller...blue hair...carries around a sword...I've been looking for him for sometime..."
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Post by KitsuneMIKO on Dec 16, 2007 23:33:52 GMT -5
((sry its so short, couldn’t think of much))
”YUKINA….YUKINA… GET YOUR BUTT OVER HERE!
She chuckled it sounded like Blitzen had tracked her down and he was non to happy that she gave him the slip. He needed to improve on his tracking skills anyways, so she would give him some practice time to time. He would find her eventually so she just turned back to the young demoness. She shook her head no indicating she hadn’t seen the half breed she was talking about.
”Sorry but I haven’t seen the half breed your talking about. You’re the first demon I’ve come across here, though that could be because of my friends lovely yelling. You can probably here him, he should be arriving any second.”
Just as she had finished a tall blonde man came stomping up, completely ignoring the other demoness.
”Yukina, you shouldn’t go running off like that. This place is invested with demons, and with you being human in all you stand no chance. What were you thinking what if you had run into a demon. THEY COULD EAT YOU!”
As he ranted he threw his arms over his head to emphasize his point. All he got in return was a small laugh from her and a point in the direction of another girl. Of course leave it to her to find another demon when he wasn’t around. He glared at the demoness, and stepped in front of Yukina.
”Well at least Yukina only ran into a pathetic lower class demon, even she could defend herself against you…but who the hell are you?”
Yukina rolled her eyes at his dramatics. She smiled apologetically to the demoness, after all he didn’t have to be so rude. She grabbed Blitzen ear and pulled him down to her height, obviously not happy with him.
”Blitzen behave, you said yourself she’s not much of a threat so try being polite for once…Now Lily so sorry for Blitzens behavior, you see he’s never liked strangers that much so please don’t be too insulted. Now back to the boy you mentioned before, maybe we can help you find him.”
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Post by kami on Dec 17, 2007 9:56:22 GMT -5
Lily watched as Blitzen came in. She looked at him with no interest. ‘Demons were no fun without a playful side…’ she thought as she replied: “Thanks anyways.” She then listen to then talk and heard parts like: “demons would eat her” and she thought: ‘Not all demons eat humans you know…’ She really didn’t like the comment about her being “lower class.” She despised being called lower class. She watched as Blitzen moved in front of Yukina and sighed as she said to him: “Look…for one I’m Lily…second…was it Blitzen…I don’t eat humans…I might eat their FOOD…but not them…my friend told me that if demons ate humans then they would try and kill us or start war…” she said angry. She was ready to fight these two but relaxed and thought: “This Blitzen is almost like Kami…a little over protective but cared about his friends…whether demon or not…’
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Post by KitsuneMIKO on Dec 17, 2007 16:10:37 GMT -5
((OK if I thought the intro post didn’t have enough description what makes you think this ones ok? Usually if someone is just rusty they get better with each post…not worse. >.< This is just pathetic, your post burned my eyes not to mention the complete lack of effort infuriates me! I gave you a guide line to go by USE IT! For it isn’t just a suggestion now I’m telling you to use it. This is an intermediate rpg site, if you don’t think you can put anymore effort into your posts then I don’t think this is the site for you. Now if you do want to improve I’m more then willing to help you out, but just to make sure your actually trying to improve I’m going to be monitoring all your posts. So if you suddenly find your posts missing then that would be me deleting them because they sucked with out a good reason. So fix this one or your not getting a reply.))
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